First off let me welcome you to DA!!!!! I'm sure you will love it here!!
Anyway I really like this photo... its mysterious, and intriguing.. I like it black and white and so dark.. the only thing I could suggest is at the very end of the road... there is something back there... not the person but behind them... it would be really cool if that window or building w/e it may be wasn't there... otherwise its a really great piece!! I hope to see more from you!!